tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5873878721715834303.post1390153930174284122..comments2023-10-09T03:23:22.073-07:00Comments on Shapes And Disfigurements Of Raymond Antrobus: Poem Upon Reflection Of Black History MinuteRaymond Antrobushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04283895579062324614noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5873878721715834303.post-59077041504591442642011-09-23T14:40:00.240-07:002011-09-23T14:40:00.240-07:00I appreciate your thoughts, definitely. May revisi...I appreciate your thoughts, definitely. May revisit and expand if it calls in the future.Raymond Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283895579062324614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5873878721715834303.post-60658999427564129472011-09-23T14:32:35.576-07:002011-09-23T14:32:35.576-07:00i hear you, just chipping in my thoughts (though w...i hear you, just chipping in my thoughts (though wasn't thinking so much about length)Knoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14461018704785016295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5873878721715834303.post-60617726063970881892011-09-23T14:10:41.218-07:002011-09-23T14:10:41.218-07:00Well, it doesn't need to be more. It was a muc...Well, it doesn't need to be more. It was a much longer poem but I chopped it in half feeling like less is more...Also I felt it is less indulgent if its shorter.Raymond Antrobushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283895579062324614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5873878721715834303.post-50628216246368332172011-09-22T14:02:49.926-07:002011-09-22T14:02:49.926-07:00i love that Teddy boys line/image, and the 'sq...i love that Teddy boys line/image, and the 'squared up in pubs' line also. but, and this may just be me, but it feels like this could be more - like you're holding back in it somehow.Knoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14461018704785016295noreply@blogger.com